Hey Joe, this is a really great piece.
. I like how it goes from chaotic to orderly from left to right...
. However, the blurb of black doesn't it... it just makes a perfect mess... ugly... namean?
. Do you think perhaps the piece could be shorter? because the white text, looks lost and misplaced if you continue scrolling down. Maybe if it was shorter, it would have more of an asthetic value.
I really like the feel of this
[Currently working on] Surviving teaching video production, and editing shorts
This one is meant to be printed and mounted. Not a web peice.
I did the it at 150 dpi...then just sized it down for the web view. So imagine it printed out on say 11x17 matte paper and mounted on an 18x20 black board.
» some people believe soccer is an matter of life and death. i'm very disappointed
with that attitude. i can assure you it is much, much more important than that.
posted on 10.29.2003 at 02:15
