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Author Subject: Vector Project (Part I)
jooli
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posted on 7.2.2004 at 06:27 Reply With Quote
Vector Project (Part I)

This is one part of my vector project to imitate the style of the Lavalife Print Ads (Vector style)
I couldnt make up my mind about whether to do gradients or just shades of darker colours upon colours to adjust lighting... i dont realy like gradients but decided to try it anyway... will probably eventually change it.
Hopefully by the end I'll have a classroom set up with guys, and a full ad

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Just brushing up on my vectorstyle




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jooli
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posted on 7.2.2004 at 06:29 Reply With Quote
mmm alot of detail shadding was kinda lost in the export :/ sorry
[ still WIP so the img that you see may not be what others see ]

[Edited on 7.2.2004 by jooli]




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bob
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posted on 7.2.2004 at 16:00 Reply With Quote
Amazing vector work. Great job




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posted on 7.2.2004 at 17:47 Reply With Quote
very nice work, i like the sketchy feel of lightest white bits on the wings.





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posted on 7.3.2004 at 15:27 Reply With Quote
looks neat jooli, love the feathers




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posted on 7.3.2004 at 22:19 Reply With Quote
have to agree, looks nice jooli..




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posted on 7.12.2004 at 21:14 Reply With Quote
Very well done jooli!
I like the clean and it's simplicity.
You did very great job on the shading, especially the wings. They are so alive!
The only thing that I'm not so sure about is the hair. It felt so strange and weird for me.
Well it's just my opinion.

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posted on 7.13.2004 at 10:42 Reply With Quote
good job jools, I like the overall feel of it... great job on the wings! but there are a few things that might need some work.

1. I'd try to add some shading to the skin also, not just to the clothes, not hard shadings some little color differences to give it some more depth.

2. you really got to work on the typo, right now it really isn't that well, placement isn't that bad but font, especially that one you used for "corporate sin". but also size difference is maybe a bit to big...




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posted on 7.13.2004 at 12:06 Reply With Quote
Li! Are you back??

(Eddie, yeah, I know )




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posted on 7.13.2004 at 18:14 Reply With Quote
It could just be me, but, the corner of the right shoe (the one on the left,) looks a bit square.
It might be, meant to look like that, but, it just looks a bit strange to me.

(Mark, )

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pixiegal
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posted on 7.20.2004 at 21:45 Reply With Quote
quote:
Originally posted by Mark
Li! Are you back??

(Eddie, yeah, I know )


hmmm.... not really I guess.
you know, like usual... come and go.




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posted on 7.21.2004 at 11:56 Reply With Quote
quote:
Originally posted by edduddiee
(Mark, )


(I made a huge mistake two weeks ago )




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posted on 7.23.2004 at 19:06 Reply With Quote
I love it!
What'd you use to make this?
...and try to avoid using gradients, esp. if you're trying to immitate the lavalife ads (as seen on the subway! <3 those ads)

Though I truly love the wings/feathers... it definitely needs work imo.. where and how I'm not quite sure though.. sorry.
I think her left shoe needs some tweaking (curve out the end).
The gray `neath her left hand is too dark. Her left shoulder is also a tad bit too dark (and seems to be passed where it should be).

but yes -- great stuff.

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